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Review · Round 03

You sent five pages on the 18th. They are on amillati.com now, word for word, with the figure and the motion kept, as you asked. Writing lives inside Community, and the menu is down to four.

Below: what I think, what is still open, and a new way to send me files without WhatsApp.

There is also a studio preview of three pages with moving headers, at "your site, in motion". Nothing on amillati.com changes.

See what is open Open amillati.com Your site, in motion
Round 03
You sent
I built
It is live
Your move
What I think01

You asked what I think.

I think it is better. It is shorter, it is more yours, and it says each thing once. Four reasons, then two small checks.

01

It says each thing once.

The offers and the line about who this is not for now live on Coaching, where someone deciding actually reads them. The homepage just opens the doors, and it moves faster for it.

02

Body, Spirit, Mind is yours now.

That was the last part of the homepage written in our words rather than yours. Your three lines are there now, and they carry it.

03

Goldman Sachs, on the front page.

Naming it in Why me does more than any sentence we could have written around it. It earns trust in one line.

04

Writing belongs with Community.

It is the other work that is not billed. Folding it in took a page off the menu, and the essays still have a home.

Two small things caught my eye while I built it. They are first in the open list, with a one-tap answer each.
See what is open

Still open02

What is still open.

Seven things. Two of them open the site to Google. The rest are at your pace. Each one saves on its own, straight to me.

Send files03

Send files straight here.

No more WhatsApp and saving things down. Pages, documents, screenshots, photos: drop them here and they come straight to me, with your note.

Drop files here or choose them Up to 24 MB each. Photos, PDFs, Word, pages, spreadsheets.
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Choose files, or drag them onto the box.On a phone, this opens your photos and files.
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Add a line saying what they are for.
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Press Send.They appear in the list below. That is your receipt.

Sent so far

Nothing yet. The first thing you send will appear here.

Private to this portal. Nothing you send here is published anywhere.

The loop04

The loop so far.

How we work: you send something, I build it and put it live, anything I need from you waits here, and you close it here. Every round so far is below.

You send
I build
It goes live
You close what is open
  1. Round 019 and 10 September

    Your copy, live.

    You sent final copy for six pages. It went live on amillati.com the next day, word for word, and thirteen questions came here.

  2. Round 0211 to 14 September

    Ten answers, all applied.

    You answered ten of the thirteen on the 11th. By the 14th, every one of them was live.

    What you picked, and what I did (9)
  3. Round 0318 and 19 September

    Your wording, word for word.

    You sent five pages and asked for Writing to go. Everything below is live, in your words, with the figure and the motion kept.

    What changed, page by page (7)
    MenuFour buttons. Writing is gone and Community & Charity is now Community.
    HomepageYour new order, the stats row, your Body, Spirit, Mind, three rooms, K’s line, and the 45-minute close.
    CoachingYour three quotes, 10 to 12 sessions, and K’s story as you tightened it.
    ConsultingThe new C-suite row and your shorter lists.
    CommunityYour writing section with four essays. Lumivoce and Wong Chuk Hang are still marked, waiting on the two lines.
    AboutYour shorter story, Most days, and the Write to me close.
    Old linksOld links to the Writing page now land on Community.
  4. Now

    Your move.

Close the loop

Close the loop.

Two lines open the site to Google. Everything else is at your pace.

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